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Screw the Mature filter, there needs to be a Close-Up-Of-Bugs filter.  And who came up with the idiotic idea to give these things a DD?  An incredible troll, that's who.

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ferretywrath Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the watch!
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Yitik Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013   Writer
No problem~
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CrusaderMaria Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011
Yes, I came her from the DD, but I stayed because I was mesmorized. You have mind blowing work. Thanks for sharing it with us!
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Yitik Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011   Writer
Very kind of you. Thanks for having a look!
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Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, you've got a beautiful gallery. That is why I invite you to join [link] .
That'd be really awesome if you accept.
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Yitik Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011   Writer
I'll have a look.
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Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thx ♥
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Bebopboy Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011
Thank you for the feedback on "Winter In Warsaw".

I would just like to clarify some comments you have with it. the syntax I used such as "reigns" instead of rains, I used it to say that the snowfall reigns over the city (controls it).
For "tore me to sunder" is correct word choice also if I where to say tore me asunder it would be redundant because asunder means being torn into pieces.
Its a period piece as well I researched alot about Poland and people can learn alot about Poland just by reading the poem so the location is as important as the characters.
I havent read any other poems centered around similar events such as mine and with keeping in strict iambic pentameter/Villanelle while telling a story and I read alot of poetry on dA, if you find any let me know.
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Yitik Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011   Writer
Syntax is grammar. You mean word choice. Vocabulary.

One can reign over something, but not reign down upon it.

Sunder is a verb; it's thus grammatically incorrect in that context. "to be torn asunder" is very common phrasing, and would be correct here.

I understand the location is supposed to be as important as the characters, but I believe the poem would have been better if the setting took precedent. It didn't, given the final couplet.

Your poem didn't keep in strict iambic pentameter at all. Nor is it villanelle. It's merely an ABAB piece about a lost love.
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versailles6 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
"Ode to Phonetics" has been featured here: [link] =)
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